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Old 03-18-2009, 11:22 AM
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Dominance War IV - 3d - Irritated1 - Murha
glad the war has come again, For this one i'm going for a demon abomination

I have a few ideas, I'm leaning towards one but would appreciate some impute



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Old 03-18-2009, 11:24 AM
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The first(left) is very good concept.
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Old 03-18-2009, 12:00 PM
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Great design Irritated i like first sketch.

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Old 03-18-2009, 12:06 PM
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Cool sketches, prefer 1 and 4
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Old 03-18-2009, 01:17 PM
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So I decided to develop a combination of a few of the ideas, I didn't do the first one because although I love the shape I had real trouble figuring out interesting surface detail for the serpent tail. so this one is a combination of 2and 4. I think I'm going to hunch it a bit more.



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Old 03-18-2009, 01:21 PM
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Old 03-18-2009, 01:34 PM
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I really liked the first 1 but to be honest they are all kick ass!!!
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Old 03-18-2009, 04:25 PM
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dude, don't give up the Geiger you had going in that first page, you had some really sick anatomy tricks going on, i like the new one, just seems like as a forum we're all inherently stuck on the same anatomy
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Old 03-18-2009, 05:14 PM
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Yeah, same opinion.
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Old 03-18-2009, 06:58 PM
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OK so I combined the first sketch with the last one, using the body type with the surface detail. I'll try and do a more finished concept this evening, thanks for the feedback



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Old 03-18-2009, 07:31 PM
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i like the last one best, tho i think u should add some extra arms or something to make him look more viscious, right now he looks more like a footsoldier, id say pimp him out a bit so he can kick some of the other contributions asses!
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The last one really cool concept. I like it.
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OK I think I've got this one. Thanks for all the feedback it defiantly made for a better entry here is my finale rough concept I think I'm going to start modeling




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Wow, this guy looks awesome. I actually liked him better with legs.

If you do go with the snake body, I definitely think you should make it a bit thicker. Really good stuff man. Keep it up.
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I love the mouth with the extra hole in the cheek, really wicked looking!

What kind of texture are you going for over the body? I picture him with a sleak surface kind of like the aliens from the alien trilogy.
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dude what are you thinking color wise for this nasty, so many avenues open to you, might be good to start planning now lolz
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yup dude, the last one is so much better....
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Old 03-19-2009, 01:12 AM
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Looking good!!!! I can't wait to see your base mesh
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Really like the evolution of the design! keep up the good work.
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Nice work man! Keep pushing, if you keep evolving at this pace it's going to be awesome! I'm glad you returned the bulk to his shoulders, and I love the gnarly head with multiple mouths. I think the snake tail is the weak link right now.
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