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Old 07-16-2008, 11:24 PM
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Comicon Challenge | axelalonso | Poison Ivy Hiedra
Comicon Challenge | axelalonso | Poison Ivy Hiedra


axelalonso has entered the competition!

Hi Everybody I am doing my dear favorite queen of green peace corporation the all sexier and mighty "Ivy Poison" ...and;
I FINISH YAY! so here they are, I really Hope you like them;

UPDATE FINAL

Final Concept
repainted a bit



Modeling Sheet




Conceptual Sheet done! Initial Sketches



Extra Concept!



I am so tired CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL ! poison flowers from the house !

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Old 07-18-2008, 12:13 PM
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I will post the other 2 sketches later on today ...shall I start painting this one ?

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Old 07-22-2008, 09:12 AM
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Thats really quite cool
I like the vines running all over her body
and the fly trap is a nice touch.
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Old 07-24-2008, 03:55 PM
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Thanks Rayartz...I am glad you liked it more concepts coming today...sorry for the bad posting and work on her..but I had some back troubles..And we all artist know how bad thats fro our drawing daily postures XD! So sorry about that! I am posting more often now that I am better!
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Old 07-24-2008, 10:01 PM
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so you are the owner of the beautiful Ive?!

nice work in there, beautiful line work, nice anathomy and very caliente!
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Old 07-25-2008, 12:55 AM
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Proud Ohhh the Ivy.......
Well Axel, Here we are again, I submitted my thumbnail already so you will see me join tomorrow, yay!
The Ivy's looking neat! I'll suggest you to take care with the nose, it's a tricky angle. The tip of the nose looks like she's looking up, but her head is not really tilted back at all. So the nose tends to look a bit like stuck against a window.
Hope to see more of the lady soon, I know you're kinda busy...
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Old 07-25-2008, 07:45 AM
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Sweet Ivy...
Nice sketch. One crit I'd make is that her feet don't sit in "3D space" because they both sitting in the same spot vertically. If you drop the left leg back (move the point of ground contact up) it'll help sell it better.

Keep up the good stuff...
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Old 07-25-2008, 02:18 PM
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EJames- Thanks so much...Yes Ivy its a not a hot girl Its a hot woman! I love that of her! Very glad to have you here, and you are always welcome to come back ...

Gabrie
l- YAY YAY YAY! you are IN ? I am so following your thread! Will be great! I am sure and we'll have fun! About the nose yes looks porky hahaha I am changing that for sure thanks buddy!


Humbleego- Thank you yes those feet are wrong! haha my posture will be upgrade it thanks for the comment! I really appreciated it !

So Now that I did 2 more concepts and clean them up somehow...I am posting really soon!
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Old 07-25-2008, 03:48 PM
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Proud Upgrdae Poison Ivy 1sth concept!



So Here it is some of the changes I did for her...

No straps...more sexy nature to the eye

Her Nose its in a best angle I think..less porky

And feet...change her right leg to look upfront ..so she can look more 3d or so I think ..

Let me know what you think?
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Old 07-25-2008, 05:07 PM
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hello! I think that there are some really neat intricacies in your line work and your pose is coming along nicely. I think that you have the right idea on the feet, but humbleego is right about the plane of contact and i still think that looks a bit unresolved. the position she is standing with her feet looks unnatural and would be difficult to stand in (especially in those heels ). Her body is at 3/4 while her feet are in like an open 4th postition and one behind the other. The way to resolve this is to move the left foot back in perspective. I do like her mood and all tehsex she emits, and hope to see more from you.
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Old 07-25-2008, 07:03 PM
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Ksan- thank you! I will resolve that problem the solution you mentioned it's very easy to understand and to do! Thanks again !
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Old 07-25-2008, 11:28 PM
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Hi Guys Here they are finally 3 concepts I did for her 3 more to come those will be a bit more close to the cute and the cartoony style of her...

SO I made the fix on the 1sth... I hope I jump that foot issue if not let me know... ...hahaha! Since I am slow to get sometimes the message , sorry about that!


So Here they are;

1sth choice " The Venus trap "



2nd choice " The Queen of the Jungle "



3rd choice; "The Amazon Flora"


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Old 07-26-2008, 05:06 PM
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Awesome concepts Axel. My favorite is the second one, it looks like she's becoming more plant like with the growths on her back.
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Old 07-26-2008, 05:18 PM
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Number 3 all the way for me. That one has the most solid costume design IMO.. the others are feeling a little busy. There's some nice stuff going on in #2 as well, but it's a bit too much of a straight profile shot.

Things that really stand out on #3 are: her hair ties, shoulder leaves and the shape of her skirt. I also really like the arm thorns and her sandals, and the expression is good too.

One suggestion: maybe try replacing her upper leg straps with the vines from #2? I could see that working nicely.
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Old 07-26-2008, 08:02 PM
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Trino- Thanks my Friend! I like that evil plant from her back as well! will see once I get all the ideas down! I am really counting in your opinion form all of you here! Thanks again for the support

Gorillagrin- I agree with that change, you are very right it will work well on her! Thanks so much for the great feed back help me to understand better all the positive and negative points to polish on her! Thanks!
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Old 07-27-2008, 10:57 PM
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ugh cute i like poison ivy 2 shoes
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Oh, wow - looks like I wasn't the only one to think of drawing Miss Isley! Loving the progression - think your Ivy's feeling a lot more calm than mine!

Nice work!
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Old 07-29-2008, 01:20 AM
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Conceptual Sheet try 1!
Ctrhellscream- Thanks they add spike sexy appeal to feminine power! haha!

Naitgrey- I love yours 2 so much! Thanks for supporting your fellow plants, About my Ivy we can call her "Yerba Venenosa" thats Poison Ivy on Spanish! and I guess she got this big egomania of superiority, than showing emotions when she's in her killer mood, its to much for the victims...hahaha besides if you frown your face you will get wrinkles that's not good for Mrs. Pamela!

Thanks so much Guys! FOR THE FINAL;

I WILL CONVINE COSTUME #1 SEXY APPEAL
#2 LEGS-SHOES...plant will be in the BG
#3 TORSO-(long type) SHOES & HAIR ooh and weapon! just whip it



Heres the latest concept sheet I Got ....I think I got to many ...hahaha maybe will color some more...now I am just doing final thumbnails for the beauty shoot! and later on the rotation, will get to touch the concept sheet again once I am done with the other 2 !

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Old 07-29-2008, 01:23 PM
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Cool, I always thought Poison Ivy should have more plants incorporated into her costume, so I'm glad you're going a little more fantastical with it. Looking forward to the next step you take with her design...
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Old 07-29-2008, 06:57 PM
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Thanks PURPLE TSUYOI I am really glad about the costume feed back! and I sure will enjoy lots your feature visits to Mrs Pamela Isley! thanks buddy!
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